DARK MOUNTAIN MORNING

by fishingpoet on January 20, 2013 · 19 comments

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A chalkboard on the front porch of the general store
in the small Adirondack hamlet that our cabin
is loosely associated with had the forecast
written neatly above the morning’s coffee special
Blue-bird through Thursday it said
followed by a smiley face and the morning’s coffee special
Dark Mountain Morning and so it was
to our surprise after walking back across the footbridge
and following the quiet road a quarter-mile
to the cabin with our coffees and the kids
inhaling homemade blueberry muffins
that the clouds gathered and unrolled over the lake
a wide gray west-bound expanse of rain on the heels
of a wind ushering a 10-degree temperature drop
it was on us before we could grab the towels drying
on the line before we could turn the canoes over
and rescue tackle-boxes and rods and lifejackets
from the dock before we could close cabin windows
and keep the soaking mist off the curtains
comforter on our bed and linoleum floor in the kitchen

In a mad laughing rush though
we did flip the canoes
rescue tackle and close windows
using the somewhat damp towels
to sop-up the linoleum
we found dry warm clothes
chairs on the screened porch
and watched the storm wear itself out
while the kids gabbled like ducks outside
under the run-off from the roof

 


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{ 19 comments… read them below or add one }

Brian Koz January 20, 2013 at 11:34 am

very nice, can almost taste the release of Nitrogen into the atmosphere…

Brent January 20, 2013 at 12:33 pm

Excellent stuff, Matt.

fishingpoet January 20, 2013 at 10:31 pm

Thanks, Koz. I could use some summer about now.

fishingpoet January 20, 2013 at 10:31 pm

I appreciate the shout, Brent.

Eli January 21, 2013 at 8:54 am

I can dig this.

fishingpoet January 21, 2013 at 1:13 pm

Glad that’s the case, Eli. Thanks for stopping by.

Michael January 21, 2013 at 8:29 pm

Fishingpoet,

I really enjoy your work. I was curious if I could send you something of mine for your opinion?

Betsy January 21, 2013 at 11:46 pm

Those are the best memories to have. You’ll never forget those family treasures :)

Lucas January 22, 2013 at 9:02 am

Great work as always Matt!

C.B. Crumpler January 22, 2013 at 2:12 pm

This is good matt. I can sense the urgency to prepare for an unexpected shower.
Well done.

trutta99 January 23, 2013 at 9:25 am

It felt like I was there! Keep up the good work.

Pete January 23, 2013 at 9:48 am

I’m with trutta99. I was there dude.

Work with a vision. And I saw your vision.

fishingpoet January 23, 2013 at 10:25 am

Hey Michael. Thanks for the kudos. I’d be happy to read some of your work.

fishingpoet January 23, 2013 at 10:25 am

Thanks, Bets :)

fishingpoet January 23, 2013 at 10:25 am

Hey Lucas! Great to hear from you. Thanks for the shout. Hope all is well in NoCal.

fishingpoet January 23, 2013 at 10:29 am

It’s amazing how quickly the urgency turns to acceptance once you’re soaked though. Thanks for the shout, C.B.

fishingpoet January 23, 2013 at 10:33 am

Glad it took you somewhere, trutta. High praise.

…and thanks Pete – although I think you’re pretty damn close to the same vision anyhow.

Pete McDonald January 24, 2013 at 10:08 am

One of your best, Matt.

fishingpoet January 24, 2013 at 9:58 pm

Thanks, Pete. Looking forward to having a beer and catching up with you at the show!

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